9.17.2008

Bad Decisions







Lina was being curious....I don't blame her. If I was in the mayor's office alone, I would scout it out too. I mean if you were in the president's office, and he just left the key of the world on a table, wouldn't you take it?If you were in Lina's position, you would totally take that key off of the table.
Now, Doon wasn't doing the best he could when he went into the boiler room it wasn't the smartest thing. He shouldv'e waited until he knew more about the pipeworks. Or, like until he understood other machines more. Maybe in the story he will slowly explore the tunnels more and he might find another place that controls the power of the city.
I think that Poppy, Lina's little sister, will get older eventually stumble upon the key to helping the city. I don't know what could happen after that, but they might save the city.

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